The Martial Odysse

Man I like the story but the grammar is atrocious. You could easily make this story way better by just using grammar or having AI refine each chapter and revise it. It make take some time but that would make the story so much better. I understand English may not be your first language but there are tools out there that can help you. If this is just a story you are doing for fun I get it . There’s no need to waste time but if you’re trying to get contracted and make money i guarantee you no one is going to pay for this kind of work .

This book is deeply inspiring. The world building; which focuses on bees is so intriguing, something much more different from other fantasy novels. Also, please I'm a young author striving to earn. please if anything, help me by looking at my works, thank you.😊

The premise alone is legendary. Men will speak of this book from near and far.They might not read past chapter 5, but it will be remembered!Read through chapter 11. At 8 or so it gets interesting. …Not the Hendersons! Lol

goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

I was with two of my friend the first: Louis, he is dark blonded haired, wear glasses and like me he is not muscular.

GOOD LUCK

"Lander."